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    Did You Know Before You Joined?
    Once I joined the Giant Network Marketing Company, “the biggest in its industry,” as it was told to me. I was promised daily pay and complete success with a one time payment only! Very new to network marketing, I had no idea that there was money to be paid during my stay to earn an income. It takes money to make money, no doubt in that! No one took the time to tell me. No one took the time to insist that I have a full understanding of network marketing and what it “does” take to become successful. All I was to do was follow the leader. Do what he/she does and then I would be just as rich as th
    ng and marketing professionals and they universally scoffed at it, saying it was nothing more than a waste of space and that it was too simple and too basic.

    There lies my point.

    Communication in print or in any other form needs to be sincere, warm, clear and absolutely shot of the boredom factor.

    Of course, seeing their jaws drop open in pure astonishment when I showed them the documentary evidence, was a piece of pure magic that will stay with me till the day I drop.

    Yes, for simple marketing solutions really do bring the most astounding of rewards.

    In fact, if you want to put that last sentence to

    List Building Advanced - Article Marketing for List Building I
    Article marketing is an ideal tool for list building, and can work in many ways to attract visitors to your site. You should start by writing an article that presents useful information on the subject of your web site, or the market to which you are trying to sell.The information should be useful, and the article should contain real content, since is purpose is to attract readers to your web site for more information on what you are writing. For this reason the article must also be well written, free from spelling mistakes, and as grammatical as you can make it. If you are not sure, then hav
    Have you ever opened a sales letter or any other type of promotional material and you said to yourself "what on earth are they telling me... what's the bloody connection here... surely they cannot be saying that... who the heck understands all that?"

    Well, let me tell you that you're not alone in your thinking.

    You see, the way we read, the way we write, the way we converse, stems all the way back when we were in school.

    We were told the PROPER way to write and understand English.

    We then add to the confusion in later life by reading and listening to the jargon and academic speak of professors, article writers, 'traditional' advertising people who feel the need to 'educate' us about the sophistication of the English language.

    Of course, little, if none of it has any real worth in the day to day of communicating with each other.

    I mean, come on, who on earth talks to each other using words such as...

    Indestructibility... effervescence... revolutions... convolute... incumbent... petulance...

    Well, okay, maybe intellectuals, academics, aristocrats... maybe... but pretty much on the whole, most of us talk okay, in a kind of chatty, friendly, sit around a cup of coffee type way, do you not agree?

    If that IS the case, and if you yourself agree that that's how you most likely talk, then doesn't it make sense that we WRITE MARKETING COMMUNICATION AND BUSINESS PROMOTIONS IN THE WAY THAT WE MOST LIKELY SPEAK?

    And, do you know what?

    I know this core message is troubling for a number of people. Especially those who have been educated in a particular way...who have been told that they need an ADVANCED VOCABULARY in order to reach the top in life.

    In fact, a number of English teachers all round the globe will be jumping up and down in frustration and disbelief at the mere thought of written communication being littered with colloquialisms, chatty style writing and the breaking of a number of grammar rules.

    But do you know something? As hard as I try, I'm hard pressed to find a really rich English teacher! Now isn't THAT telling us something?

    THE PROOF OF THE PUDDING...

    I was literally blown away when just the other day, I saw a letter that had exactly 361 words on it, contained none of the pompous, intellectual, high brow language... but... was mailed in the millions, created a business that spawned 8 countries and made millions for the owners!

    And the funny thing about that letter was I showed it to a number of advertising and marketing professionals and they universally scoffed at it, saying it was nothing more than a waste of space and that it was too simple and too basic.

    There lies my point.

    Communication in print or in any other form needs to be sincere, warm, clear and absolutely shot of the boredom factor.

    Of course, seeing their jaws drop open in pure astonishment when I showed them the documentary evidence, was a piece of pure magic that will stay with me till the day I drop.

    Yes, for simple marketing solutions really do bring the most astounding of rewards.

    In fact, if you want to put that last sentence to t

    It's Always the Poor that End Up Paying for Everyone Else
    “She was poor but she was honest, Victim of the Squire’s game, First he loved her then he left her, Ain’t it all a bleedin’ shame?”Just like the anonymous poor girl in the above Victorian Music Hall song, it’s those who can afford it the least that usually end up paying the most.They say money is the root of all evil. Well I am not too sure about that but money (or the lack of) certainly does do strange things to people.Everybody dreams of winning the Lottery and being able to walk into your job the next day and politely (or not, depending on your relationship with
    rs, 'traditional' advertising people who feel the need to 'educate' us about the sophistication of the English language.

    Of course, little, if none of it has any real worth in the day to day of communicating with each other.

    I mean, come on, who on earth talks to each other using words such as...

    Indestructibility... effervescence... revolutions... convolute... incumbent... petulance...

    Well, okay, maybe intellectuals, academics, aristocrats... maybe... but pretty much on the whole, most of us talk okay, in a kind of chatty, friendly, sit around a cup of coffee type way, do you not agree?

    If that IS the case, and if you yourself agree that that's how you most likely talk, then doesn't it make sense that we WRITE MARKETING COMMUNICATION AND BUSINESS PROMOTIONS IN THE WAY THAT WE MOST LIKELY SPEAK?

    And, do you know what?

    I know this core message is troubling for a number of people. Especially those who have been educated in a particular way...who have been told that they need an ADVANCED VOCABULARY in order to reach the top in life.

    In fact, a number of English teachers all round the globe will be jumping up and down in frustration and disbelief at the mere thought of written communication being littered with colloquialisms, chatty style writing and the breaking of a number of grammar rules.

    But do you know something? As hard as I try, I'm hard pressed to find a really rich English teacher! Now isn't THAT telling us something?

    THE PROOF OF THE PUDDING...

    I was literally blown away when just the other day, I saw a letter that had exactly 361 words on it, contained none of the pompous, intellectual, high brow language... but... was mailed in the millions, created a business that spawned 8 countries and made millions for the owners!

    And the funny thing about that letter was I showed it to a number of advertising and marketing professionals and they universally scoffed at it, saying it was nothing more than a waste of space and that it was too simple and too basic.

    There lies my point.

    Communication in print or in any other form needs to be sincere, warm, clear and absolutely shot of the boredom factor.

    Of course, seeing their jaws drop open in pure astonishment when I showed them the documentary evidence, was a piece of pure magic that will stay with me till the day I drop.

    Yes, for simple marketing solutions really do bring the most astounding of rewards.

    In fact, if you want to put that last sentence to

    Sellers See Light At The End Of The Tunnel
    We`ve been discussing on several blogs the essence of "Pricing a home to sell". As the market has changed so has the marketing and listing of a home. Today overpricing a home won`t accomplish anything except keeping the home on the market for a very long time!Case in point:Two months ago we had a buyer make an offer on a home located in Oklawaha,Florida. The home is situated on an a small lake and the seller was asking $245,000. The Comps in the area didn`t justify the price and we made what we thought was a very reasonable offer based on the recent sales in the area. Our offer of $192,
    the case, and if you yourself agree that that's how you most likely talk, then doesn't it make sense that we WRITE MARKETING COMMUNICATION AND BUSINESS PROMOTIONS IN THE WAY THAT WE MOST LIKELY SPEAK?

    And, do you know what?

    I know this core message is troubling for a number of people. Especially those who have been educated in a particular way...who have been told that they need an ADVANCED VOCABULARY in order to reach the top in life.

    In fact, a number of English teachers all round the globe will be jumping up and down in frustration and disbelief at the mere thought of written communication being littered with colloquialisms, chatty style writing and the breaking of a number of grammar rules.

    But do you know something? As hard as I try, I'm hard pressed to find a really rich English teacher! Now isn't THAT telling us something?

    THE PROOF OF THE PUDDING...

    I was literally blown away when just the other day, I saw a letter that had exactly 361 words on it, contained none of the pompous, intellectual, high brow language... but... was mailed in the millions, created a business that spawned 8 countries and made millions for the owners!

    And the funny thing about that letter was I showed it to a number of advertising and marketing professionals and they universally scoffed at it, saying it was nothing more than a waste of space and that it was too simple and too basic.

    There lies my point.

    Communication in print or in any other form needs to be sincere, warm, clear and absolutely shot of the boredom factor.

    Of course, seeing their jaws drop open in pure astonishment when I showed them the documentary evidence, was a piece of pure magic that will stay with me till the day I drop.

    Yes, for simple marketing solutions really do bring the most astounding of rewards.

    In fact, if you want to put that last sentence to

    Five Ways to Turn Small Projects into Professional Success
    I know that there have been people with the title of Project Manager for many years, and there has been a growing body of knowledge, skills, tools and techniques in the area of project management for a long time. Yes, there have always been projects. But never before has it been so important for every person to be able to lead, manage or participate in projects of all sizes.The Quality movement of the 80’s and 90’s taught people everywhere that work is a process – that we can look at our work in this way to make improvements, large and small. The improvement came in part because it got people
    h colloquialisms, chatty style writing and the breaking of a number of grammar rules.

    But do you know something? As hard as I try, I'm hard pressed to find a really rich English teacher! Now isn't THAT telling us something?

    THE PROOF OF THE PUDDING...

    I was literally blown away when just the other day, I saw a letter that had exactly 361 words on it, contained none of the pompous, intellectual, high brow language... but... was mailed in the millions, created a business that spawned 8 countries and made millions for the owners!

    And the funny thing about that letter was I showed it to a number of advertising and marketing professionals and they universally scoffed at it, saying it was nothing more than a waste of space and that it was too simple and too basic.

    There lies my point.

    Communication in print or in any other form needs to be sincere, warm, clear and absolutely shot of the boredom factor.

    Of course, seeing their jaws drop open in pure astonishment when I showed them the documentary evidence, was a piece of pure magic that will stay with me till the day I drop.

    Yes, for simple marketing solutions really do bring the most astounding of rewards.

    In fact, if you want to put that last sentence to

    Three Steps to a Professional Image
    One of the biggest reasons home-based business entrepreneurs often fail to attract customers is that they also fail to create a professional image. A professional image is an element of your credibility and without credibility winning customers is an uphill battle.Think of it this way: would you give your hard earned money to a guy selling products out of an alley? Probably not. For one, you would wonder where the good had come from. It would also be inconvenient because your method of payment options would be limited. You would also not have the peace of mind of knowing you could get a refund
    ng and marketing professionals and they universally scoffed at it, saying it was nothing more than a waste of space and that it was too simple and too basic.

    There lies my point.

    Communication in print or in any other form needs to be sincere, warm, clear and absolutely shot of the boredom factor.

    Of course, seeing their jaws drop open in pure astonishment when I showed them the documentary evidence, was a piece of pure magic that will stay with me till the day I drop.

    Yes, for simple marketing solutions really do bring the most astounding of rewards.

    In fact, if you want to put that last sentence to the test in your own business, here's what you should do:

    Find out who's the most successful sales person in your business (if you're the sole 'sales person' for your business, practice, consultancy, then you'll have to get someone else to help you with this exercise)... and eavesdrop on their client/customer conversation.

    In fact, do more than that... record their conversation... and do it a number of times in order to capture the best selling conversation you can, whilst they're in full flow. Just capture it!

    Either get it on tape, video, mobile phone, whatever. Just record it.

    Then, what you do next is to simply transcribe that 'SELLING CONVERSATION' and create it in print.

    You can remove all the unwanted ums and ers, references to the weather and the general chit chat, and then, what you'll be left with is the bare boned essence of a truly wonderful selling sales script. One that can be converted into a number of media formats...

    Sales letters, websites, postcards, adverts... you name the media, you'll have a basis to adopt adapt and apply the winning sales script you have now created.

    Would you like to know how publishers Boardroom Reports, A 100 MILLION A YEAR BUSINESS started out?

    It started out EXACTLY the way I just handed out to you in this valuable article.

    It happened by simply taping a conversation between the owner Marty Edelston and a copywriter by the name of Gene Schwartz, and then transcribing it in print.

    I hope you study it well, for it contains the seeds to propel your business like you won't believe.

    Raja C. Hireker

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